Hi Aiko - I like the simplicity of the 3rd and 5th spreads (sculpture and do you see/art). There's a point that comes across clearly and it seems to appeal to a younger crowd which i think you were aiming for? The font you used for "Art" seems really appropriate. The "bento" spread has a lot going on - is it supposed to be repeated on both sides?
Hi Aiko - I like the simplicity of the 3rd and 5th spreads (sculpture and do you see/art). There's a point that comes across clearly and it seems to appeal to a younger crowd which i think you were aiming for? The font you used for "Art" seems really appropriate. The "bento" spread has a lot going on - is it supposed to be repeated on both sides?
ReplyDeleteThank you for the comment!
ReplyDeleteFor the "bento" spread, I actually used
two different typefaces for texts to compare
which is better.